Some obey scriptures very much,
And some wonder and wander,
There is randomness seen in group,
But unity is happiness they search.
In own style some motivate others,
Some follow and some do not,
But they gather to search light,
All need light in the dark is unity.
Science searches for truth of creation,
Space and stars wonder them in galaxy,
Science says there is super power,
Theists say same thing, he is God.
People in diversity follow rituals,
Some worship nature, some universe,
There is randomness in thoughts,
But truly they search God is unity.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,07 October 2017. All rights reserved.
NOTE: in my response number TWO there is an error: quartrain must be: quatrain. Thank you.
Nr. THREE: Absolutely, God is the only Subject in all the poems, the readers who believe will find Unity. Absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing such most beautiful poems about our Lord. Your gift and talents are greatest. A greatest 10 for the vote. God's Blessings in Abundance. Sincerely, God's humble servant, Sylvia France Chan, Dutch Poetess
Nr. TWO: I have deep respect for each of your tryings to make that visual and clearest. I regard them all as true successes and how! Indeed the grand truth are your two last lines of the last quartrain: There is randomness in thoughts, But truly they search God is unity.
Nr.ONE: You are such a true diligent producing poet IF I may say, Mr. Kumarmani Mahakul. Every poet you have almost read the poems, almost each newest publishings of their poems. In this poetry you are putting them next to each other and made a whole scala of similarities and differences.
''People in diversity follow rituals, Some worship nature, some universe, There is randomness in thoughts, But truly they search God is unity.'' - in this stanza is embedded the purest truth. No matter the means by which we search: we all search for the meaning of life.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am reminded how there are infinite paths through a forest, some well-defined, some never yet ventured, but no one right way that all must walk; and yet the roots of the trees so intertwine as to make of all the separate trees one forest, if not one colossal Tree. Scriptures, rituals, science, art ~ all manner of wonderments, natural and cosmic: One Heart, different beats. Unity THROUGH diversity is a bright torch! An understanding well-attained, and intelligently shared. :) Your compass never fails to point true north.