This Is The Family Life Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This Is The Family Life

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This is the life which is full of care,
Persons like this attitude are found rare.
Tolerance is too difficult to bear in body,
Such persons are there to speak truth ready.

To keep nonviolence is hardest task for men,
Chastity is top quality; difficult for women.
Benevolence bewitches people but to gain hard,
Still such people are there who tackle with glad.

This is the life where full of risk,
Some like hardest jobs that have time fix.
Some dislike let up, let down and levity,
Some like toilsome works to keep away poverty.

This is the life where full of responsibility,
It maintains discipline but doesn't reduce liberty.
Such persons are there who like this quality,
They believe in God and believe in their ability.

This is the life which makes nation great,
People are tied in with love and don't hate.
People like to sacrifice and life is fair.
This is the life on family is full of care.

This Is The Family Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this poem of family topic poet likes a life of full risk and care. He says that these types of person are found rare. Though it is too difficult to maintain the qualities of tolerance and truthfulness still some persons like to maintain these. To keep nonviolence is too difficult. To keep chastity for a woman is too difficult also. Still then there are such people who serve these. Benevolence enchants people. Some like hardest jobs to serve. Some thinks that where there is no responsibility there is no life. They believe in God and they have the nature of sacrifice. This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated topeople of the world as world is one family.
Glossary
Bewitch-enchant
Let up - relaxation of effort
Let down - disappointment
Levity -lack of serious thought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 07 April 2016

your vision of a family based on the democratic norms, yet pious virtues is very much appreciated....a nation requires these families..

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Dr John Celes 13 July 2016

a good familiy is the basic unit of a good society and progressive nation. good write sir.

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Pamela Sinicrope 12 November 2015

Nice portrayal here. Family is my bedrock and place of safety. You speak of family on a larger scale as well and I like that...especially during these divisive times. I think for some it is hardest to live in this way....a place where we all have to work together and not live life in extremes. Well done.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 20 March 2016

Your poem is deserving to be read. A good quality poem.

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Seema Jayaraman 13 September 2015

This is the life where full of responsibility...yes how we all are encumbered with this responsibility and how wish it were not so, how I wish people were just free to do what they wanted....well captured the essence of family and how our lives revolve around this spoke of responsibility...

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Valsa George 27 July 2019

Living together as a family is a happy experience though it demands a lot of sacrifices and adjustments. Without families, societies cannot go on! Only if there are good families, a society or a nation can prosper. Unfortunately families are losing the former spirit of love and unity! A good reminder of the importance of stable family relationships!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 April 2019

Family life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 November 2018

A powerful and wonderful write that touches on family. Each line aims to covey the furtherance of a good family that will make a nation great. Brilliantly penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 August 2018

A great poem on family. This should be read by everyone. A very profound write. Family has been and always will be the basic foundation of society. Its. importance must be emphasized for the good of all. Liked the 4th and 5th stanza. Very inspiring lines.10 +++and on to my Poem List.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2018

To keep nonviolence is hardest task for men, Chastity is top quality; difficult for women. the truth the whole truth but then married life can only be prolonged by COMPROMISE as when being md u said come promise marks 1000000000 fully well deservedly dear poet and my masterji

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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