Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 162,752 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

This Is The Family Life - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This is the life which is full of care,
Persons like this attitude are found rare.
Tolerance is too difficult to bear in body,
Such persons are there to speak truth ready.

To keep nonviolence is hardest task for men,
Chastity is top quality; difficult for women.
Benevolence bewitches people but to gain hard,
Still such people are there who tackle with glad.

This is the life where full of risk,
Some like hardest jobs that have time fix.
Some dislike let up, let down and levity,
Some like toilsome works to keep away poverty.

This is the life where full of responsibility,
It maintains discipline but doesn’t reduce liberty.
Such persons are there who like this quality,
They believe in God and believe in their ability.

This is the life which makes nation great,
People are tied in with love and don’t hate.
People like to sacrifice and life is fair.
This is the life on family is full of care.

Topic(s) of this poem: family


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In this poem of family topic poet likes a life of full risk and care. He says that these types of person are found rare. Though it is too difficult to maintain the qualities of tolerance and truthfulness still some persons like to maintain these. To keep nonviolence is too difficult. To keep chastity for a woman is too difficult also. Still then there are such people who serve these. Benevolence enchants people. Some like hardest jobs to serve. Some thinks that where there is no responsibility there is no life. They believe in God and they have the nature of sacrifice. This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to people of the world as world is one family.
Glossary
Bewitch-enchant
Let up – relaxation of effort
Let down – disappointment
Levity –lack of serious thought

Comments about This Is The Family Life by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Dr John Celes (7/13/2016 8:50:00 AM)


    a good familiy is the basic unit of a good society and progressive nation. good write sir. (Report) Reply

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  • Kishore Kumar Das (4/7/2016 1:52:00 AM)


    your vision of a family based on the democratic norms, yet pious virtues is very much appreciated....a nation requires these families.. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Herbert Poetry (3/20/2016 7:56:00 AM)


    Your poem is deserving to be read. A good quality poem. (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/12/2015 9:13:00 AM)


    Nice portrayal here. Family is my bedrock and place of safety. You speak of family on a larger scale as well and I like that...especially during these divisive times. I think for some it is hardest to live in this way....a place where we all have to work together and not live life in extremes. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • S.d. Tiwari (10/26/2015 4:21:00 PM)


    Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. I have also written a poem about family unfortunately could not post on Poemhunter. Now I am going to share with Poemhunter family (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (10/14/2015 10:10:00 AM)


    Fantastic, superb, no other words sir (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2015 10:04:00 PM)


    .. a pick of honor riding such lines of your thought; amazing sober of refection within the shadow of aspiration to know more about life....such point of departure tangled my mind to read and accept of what is life to its pick. thank you for sharing you add my life. God bless (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/2/2015 11:49:00 AM)


    The poem takes into account various qualities possessed by men and women that makes a country attain its full potential like you said very rightly:
    This is the life which makes nation great,
    People are tied in with love and don’t hate.
    (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (9/18/2015 4:28:00 PM)


    Wel lrounded and beautiful family poem, very nice indeed..... (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (9/13/2015 12:45:00 PM)


    This is the life where full of responsibility...yes how we all are encumbered with this responsibility and how wish it were not so, how I wish people were just free to do what they wanted....well captured the essence of family and how our lives revolve around this spoke of responsibility... (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (6/12/2015 9:39:00 AM)


    Very good! Blessed are the families who believe in God,
    they shall be saved!
    This is the life which is full of care.,
    Well done, Kumarmani!
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  • Ramesh Rai (5/13/2015 11:47:00 AM)


    Benevolence bewitches people but
    to gain hard,
    Still such people are there who
    tackle with glad. It is a great write. family is the pillar of society which enrich a country. if family collapse certainly country will collapse.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/29/2015 8:41:00 PM)


    Such persons are there to speak truth ready... nice one...10

    family is unit
    where you always find unity
    atability
    if had of the family is alive to responsibility
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  • Uma Ram (3/23/2015 1:20:00 PM)


    Felt the depth of the love for family sir...Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • June Mita (3/21/2015 7:26:00 PM)


    You have encapsulated family and life of family very well here. It is risk to have a family, and also risk to leave one country for another. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2015 10:24:00 PM)


    Kumarmani, I love how your poetry so often is filled with family ideals and quality that is shared the world over. You so succinctly describe the essence of a truly close family, and it's ripple effect around the world. Being a member of a family helps to keep one rooted in family values, morals and ethics. Please continue to write and spread the word so more people will understand the importance of family. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/8/2015 9:36:00 AM)


    This is so beautiful. I have felt the essence of the words which were mastered so beautiful
    well done
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  • (3/6/2015 4:23:00 AM)


    A great poem on family......................10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/5/2015 6:07:00 PM)


    The topic of this poem is family. I understand this poem as if the sub-continent is a family and its various countries are like rooms of of an inherited house that was built by the forefathers after a lot of fatigue and sacrifices. Then I apply the golden principles given by a great poem in one of his greatest poems and I find the principles are truly true.....................10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/5/2015 10:07:00 AM)


    Family life is one of responsibility where the members stay together sharing joy and sorrow! Family, being the smallest social unit, the progress of a nation depends very much on sound families! A fine write! (Report) Reply

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