Kim McInnis

Rookie (14 January 1989 / LaSalle Ontario)

Unproductive - Poem by Kim McInnis

say it one more time.
how miserable you are now.
how much better things could be.
say it one more time.
how terrible you feel now.
how hollow you are inside.
say it one more time.
so I can be alright.

...I'm alright.

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  • (4/4/2005 11:30:00 AM)

    You can say a fountain of thought in just nine lines. Kim you rock. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 14, 2005

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