Unproductive Poem by Kim McInnis

Unproductive

Rating: 4.5


say it one more time.
how miserable you are now.
how much better things could be.
say it one more time.
how terrible you feel now.
how hollow you are inside.
say it one more time.
so I can be alright.

...I'm alright.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Hyatt 04 April 2005

You can say a fountain of thought in just nine lines. Kim you rock.

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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