Dianna R. Evans

Rookie - 0 Points (04/25/1997 / Indiana)

*unreal Love* - Poem by Dianna R. Evans

I look into your eyes
and I fall more inlove
then I have ever been
before.
You look into my eyes
and you fall inlove with
me even more.
I say that I love you
and you say it back to me.
But now I ask myself
if you really meant it.
I ask myself if our
Love was and is Real.
If you were using me
to get another girl.
Turns out you really
were and I never thought
I could forgive you.
But instead I keep crawling back
to you just to get hurt again
and again. Because.........
Im so stupid, and
Im so inlove
I need to find
someone else to love me better.
Better then you
ever have or will....
I need to be stronger
and I need to be smarter.
Our love was and is Unreal love.
Unreal love is the worst kind of love
toooo ever have.
Baby was it true.
Were you to use me!
I want to know so I can forget you.
I need to know so it's nto constintly on my mind.
Ooh baby please! please tell me.
Did you really love me
or were you lying to me
I know the answers
I just want to hear them from you.
Ooooo Baby baby. Why?
Why did you have to make me fall inlove with you?
Why did you?
When you knew it was unreal?
You knew it but yet you did it anyways.
I thought you were different.
I thought I would love you without getting hurt
But nooo. Again I was wrong.
Wrong just like unreal love.
I think about you everyday.
And I wonder why my heart
still cares about you.
Even though you gave me unreal love.
Ohh Ohh Ohh Im try to get over you
but everytime I try it hurts to think
that your really gone.
That you really used me.
That you broke my heart.
That you can make me cry.
And you don't care.
You don't care at all....


Comments about *unreal Love* by Dianna R. Evans

  • Dianna Renate Evans (8/26/2013 7:13:00 AM)


    I was very angry but sad when I wrote this...: ( (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (8/25/2013 8:54:00 PM)


    Unreal love is the worst kind of love
    Very true. Anything unreal is the worst of its kind.
    The poem expresses your pent up frustration and emotion.
    (Report) Reply

  • Dianna Renate Evans (8/19/2013 11:28:00 AM)


    Thank u very much :) (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2013 11:13:00 AM)


    Really nice! very expressive and detailed! Keep up the good work!
    Allison,
    (Report) Reply

  • Dianna Renate Evans (8/19/2013 9:32:00 AM)


    Just got to stay strong right? (Report) Reply

  • Alookh (matin) (8/19/2013 8:43:00 AM)


    sometimes i doubt if a real love can be found in our world.......PLEASE dear everybody do not waste ur selves on the unreal loves...they are everywhere, ...please! thanx! :) (Report) Reply

  • Dianna Renate Evans (12/14/2012 9:15:00 PM)


    Thank you guys very much for your comments! :) (Report) Reply

  • Barbara Nixon (12/12/2012 1:26:00 PM)


    Great expressive poem, beautifully written. Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/12/2012 11:28:00 AM)


    What a beautiful outpouring of deep feelings and emotions about unreal love you prove your so real with such love that sweeps the reader along like the crest of a wave! Great write! (Report) Reply

  • (2/23/2012 8:03:00 PM)


    i like this. lots of emotion and feeling here good write.. dino (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2012 12:42:00 PM)


    it really is quite expressive and your emotion comes through clear and strong. Just work on rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Dianna Renate Evans (12/19/2011 10:48:00 AM)


    thanks *bleeding heart* * arielle* and thats weird we r so much alike lol and preston i no right.. i with i could just get over him tho its just not that easy i wish it was tho (Report) Reply

  • Preston Simmons (12/18/2011 9:52:00 PM)


    This is a great poem! It really expresses the powerful emotion that love is. I also like how you express the evil things that love can do to someone, and also the joys of having it present in your life. Thank you for the post! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 11:00:00 PM)


    Hun i love this poem it relates to me so much and ur just an amazing writer i feel stupied for going baack to htis same guy for about 2 years now and i still cant let him go cuz im in love with him (Report) Reply

  • Brianna Winebarger (12/15/2011 12:58:00 PM)


    THis poem is sweet and honest! (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2011 10:49:00 AM)


    your poem was very nice (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2011 10:49:00 AM)


    your poem was very nice (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/13/2011 2:13:00 PM)


    [Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/13/2011 2:11:00 PM)


    [Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011



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