Unseen But True Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Unseen But True

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Air is not seen but true,
We can feel air's presence,
When it is blown at speed
And trees are shaken,
And leaves are fallen
We see and feel presence,
When wind touches our skin.

Unseen does not mean false,
True identity is invisible,
But existence of air is felt,
If we close nose and mouth
We cannot live for a while,
Necessity of oxygen we can feel.

In God's wonderful creation
Many things are invisible
But they exist in reality,
Many micro-organisms play
But we do not see them,
Atom is present with energy
We can feel nuclear energy
But we cannot see atom.

Such unseen things are wonderful,
God's creation mesmerizes mind,
When God introduces, we know,
Our greatest father is glorious,
We love his unseen creation too!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,11 January 2019. All rights reserved.

Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: perception,wind,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chan Mongol 12 January 2019

In poetic verses, the poet scientifically proved the existence of the NIL.That nothing is everything which is the god. And god is everywhere in the unlimited universe. The poet scholarly made the point that to acknowledge atom or even air we don't have to see them. We only need to feel. Excellent! I love the poem. #10.

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Caleb Wiggins 09 October 2020

Yes, air is not seen but it is felt as true. God is not seen by us but he truly exists. I completely agree with you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 August 2020

Unseen does not mean false, True identity is invisible, But existence of air is felt, If we close nose and mouth We cannot live for a while, Necessity of oxygen we can feel. Reading your poem lead me into the world of mystery today. thank you. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 March 2019

Air is not seen! ! ! ! ! But, true! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 04 March 2019

Air is not seen but true. Atom is not seen but true. Soul is not seen but true and God is greatest truth. God gives us wisdom and we feel his mercy. Swinging in his wisdom is our fortune. We love God very much. With love and hope we are growing with him. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Valsa George 15 January 2019

We can perceive God through our inner eyes, but God remains invisible to our external eyes! Though air is not visible, we know it is there! The same is the case with God! In our every day life we experience God many times and through them we come to know of his existence! A poem of deep spiritual significance!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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