Untitled Poem by M.J. Lemon

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Rating: 5.0


last night I dreamt
I gave you a glass
of water
it was the night
before you passed away
it was the morning
I woke up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 22 January 2023

M.J.===your power has been growing immensely since I have been gone---you are amazing and so gripping---top marks and faving this extraordinary write

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M.J. Lemon 03 April 2023

Thank you Susan. Your comments, kindness are inspirational.

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Smoky Hoss 07 January 2023

Such momentum of deep meaning in so few words, amazing, and beautiful.

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M.J. Lemon 03 April 2023

Smoky, thank you so very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 October 2022

Her glass was full. Yours is half full. And now, you're rising to the occasion, my friend! Love the poem!

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M.J. Lemon 20 October 2022

Such a great observation. Many thanks, my friend.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 October 2022

I often have the same dream but I make tea instead. However, over all it's a wonderful poem Top5 Bravo!

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M.J. Lemon 12 October 2022

Thanks, LeeAnn. The tea sounds good....

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