Untitled Poem by Timothy Weiermann

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Rating: 5.0


Here I stand, hidden in the shadows
Dieing within the painful hallows
Mocked by most, treasured by few
I fall into darkness, lost to you

Words of hope are spread
Yet to me they fall, coldly ringing dead

There I lay, covered by the sky
Motionless, not showing how hard I try
Being myself, treasuring you
Smiling at the thought of something new

Smelling the bouquet,
Resisting the wine
Nothing more to say
Save that you will not be mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fahim Sayed 02 August 2008

Well penned, , poem is with nice flow..keep writing... Fahim

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Alexander Hale 03 October 2009

lovely poem i especially enjoyed the beginning. sending my love alexander

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Lesly Dee 22 August 2008

very nice poem. i love the feeling you give to it. you should think of publishing. best of wishes, lesly garza :)

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Emo Seb 21 August 2008

wow, id say of those i read this is the best. i cant wait to read the rest!

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Dawn Slanker 07 August 2008

Of your poem, this one I definitely like the best. It is nicely constructed with a lovely theme. You express your thoughts and emotions well. Well done.

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Quote By: ESB This poem is deep it come from the soul 10/10 Some how you found it...what I 've been trying to find a way to say. Fantastic poem I'm glad you wrote it/my favorites e.s.b everyone has their own way of saying certain things, it's just how it's expressed everything comes out through a different medium and i'm glad you think so highly of it

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