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I don’t want you to be like spring
Which makes the garden bloom
Eventually fading into cold winter
White, long and full of gloom.

I don’t want you to be like a flower
Spreading fragrances, tickling the senses
Eventually turning into shreds
Dry, ugly and useless.

I want you to be just like you
Drowning me in love, just the way you do
Eventually to turn into gold
Still sparkling, still passionate, as we get old.

(17 April 2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arti Chopra 20 July 2007

Beautiful and expressive poem...Preeti...flows straight from the heart Back to PH after quite long Arti

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Nikunj Parikh 24 April 2007

really wonderful poem.....refreshes me up... i love this poem.....its simply wow...... Niks

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Tranquil Ocean 20 April 2007

Sweet....but if there is no winter, you would not realize the beauty of spring.And every relationship has a winter and spring too: -) TO

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Ankur Shrivastava 20 April 2007

Beautiful...the flow and rhythm is amazing....

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