Even if I could not be the light of yours
Please consider me as your lamp.
If I'm unable to flow inside you
Nor I could entice you at all.
Still keep a little space for me
In a remote corner in you! !
Let me live these remaining days
Believing that holy and safe place in you! !
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Amitava.(20.11.2017)
It is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression and nice diction. I like to quote....... Let me live these remaining days Believing that holy and safe place in you! ! Thank you dear Sur for sharing this lovely poem.
Even if I could not be the light of yours, please consider me as your lamp. Beautiful and inspiring words, Amitava! Let your lamp light the way for Rakhee to be guided back to you in the future, that holy and safe place made for only you two! Gently, delicately passionate and profound. Another favorite of mine! Thank you for sharing, Amitava, please come back and write much more of your prophetic and philosophical poetry that stuns the mind with it's simplicity and beauty! RoseAnn
Even if I could not be the light of yours, please consider me as your lamp. Beautiful and inspiring words, Amitava. Lighting the way through the darkness to that holy and safe place in you, like a light to guide Rakhee to you in the future. Very spiritual and profound. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn
Dear Amitava Sir, An earnest prayer '' Let me live these remaining days Believing that holy and safe place in you! '' Thank you for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let me live these remaining days Believing that holy and safe place in you! ! Wow Sir, you have created so delicate a world full of love real and platonic. A poem beyond the words to praise it. Loved it so so much. 10++++++++ for it. Regards. Subhas