Value Of My Heart Poem by louis rams

Value Of My Heart



Value of my heart

Let me swim in your love and drown in the depths of your arms
And as I pick up my head I see the beauty that surrounds me.

Like the calmness of the ocean I feel your devotion
A tranquility overtakes me and to my core it shakes me.

The depth of your eyes is like the brightness of the sun
Giving life to everything and every one.
Like an oyster you found the pearl to my heart
Creating a brand new life, a brand new start

The value of my heart now has worth
You have given it a brand new birth.
© L. RAMS 092318

Thursday, August 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 25 August 2018

A lovely, melodic poem clearly evoking love! And, I can plainly see why it also caught the Captain's eye: swim, depths, ocean, oyster, pearl! Thank you for posting this gem.

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Captain Cur 23 August 2018

A beautiful love poem about the quality of love itself, to find value and fulfillment in the arms of that which and whom we love.

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louis rams 23 August 2018

thank you for that comment

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