M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 204,354 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Verse - Backward Poem - Life And Death - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life
as Journey
is mixed bag
with pains, sorrow,
betrayals linked into
empathy, sympathy, love
and emotions with truth
and falsehood eventually
leading at end where
redemption enjoying
peace and
serenity at
Death.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Death
at serenity
and peace enjoying
redemption where
end at leading eventually
falsehood and truthwith
emotions and love, sympathy,
empathy, into linked
betrayals, sorrow,
pains with bag
mixed is
journey as
life.

Comments about Verse - Backward Poem - Life And Death by M. Asim Nehal

  • Petals Azureblue (1/12/2019 8:11:00 AM)


    So beautifully done! . Thanks for sharing this gem! ! ! Congrats on perfect execution of reverse poem! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (1/12/2019 1:26:00 AM)


    Marvelously put, these two forms. Fascinating idea from your golden mind, Asim. Greatest Gift from God. I congratulate you for this greatest Blessings. Of course, YOU as the person behind this poetry has created that, but God resides in you, I am sure. All things in nature comes from God, also Life and Death. Our calendar 2019 is the age of Jesus (God) .We have not the Confucian calender, nor from Buddha or Mohammed, but Jesus.10. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/11/2019 12:21:00 PM)


    Reading from bottom towards top this gives real philosophy hidden behind. Falsehood never remains for long time. One day this breaks. Truth wins ever. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 11, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, January 11, 2019


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