Verse - Backward Poem - Life And Death Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Verse - Backward Poem - Life And Death

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Life
as Journey
is mixed bag
with pains, sorrow,
betrayals linked into
empathy, sympathy, love
and emotions with truth
and falsehood eventually
leading at end where
redemption enjoying
peace and
serenity at
Death.

Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Death
at serenity
and peace enjoying
redemption where
end at leading eventually
falsehood and truthwith
emotions and love, sympathy,
empathy, into linked
betrayals, sorrow,
pains with bag
mixed is
journey as
life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 27 September 2021

Excellent piece.....thanks for sharing..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2019

Marvelously put, these two forms. Fascinating idea from your golden mind, Asim. Greatest Gift from God. I congratulate you for this greatest Blessings. Of course, YOU as the person behind this poetry has created that, but God resides in you, I am sure. All things in nature comes from God, also Life and Death. Our calendar 2019 is the age of Jesus (God) .We have not the Confucian calender, nor from Buddha or Mohammed, but Jesus.10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2019

Reading from bottom towards top this gives real philosophy hidden behind. Falsehood never remains for long time. One day this breaks. Truth wins ever. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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