Deodath Debideen

Victory Shall Be Yours!

Holy books offer TIPS
On how we should live
Religion is man's creation
Limited truth they do give

Eras change and answers too
So what about the present
We're stuck with past recipes
Though, for NOW, there's no precedent

Krishna said to fight the evil
As an instrument of God
Do the action in surrender
No thought of personal reward

Prepare yourself for the battlefield
The blue-skinned Krishna said
Attachment and desires... all conquered
Will see the Kauravas all dead

The Mahabharat hid the deepest truth
That in the body is a dark side entity
Who attaches, desires and doth scheme
The soul has no such quality

The Bible is deceptive also
Written after AD 325
Put away your sword, my disciple
Was only so you could survive

Eras change and the guidance changes
Yet, the Gita tells you true
If you do not fight back
No heaven or Earth for you

Evil deceives in its war
Against the GOOD of Earth' firmament
TEACHERS and TESTERS, sure they are
When FORCE is their argument

Sure, put your nuclear devices away
Who live by those, die by radiations
Hiroshima and Nagasaki know the score
Nothing doing from nuclear nations

Evil hurts then harries the victim
For forgiveness and goodwill
While walking away with crime accomplished
Pretending that man can usurp God's skill

Old books offer only some help
Intelligence must find the rest
Priestcraft says there's no greater truth
Tips from bygone eras, they rate as the best

Today is unique among the times
Yet evil is always the same
New ways of defeating the the dark side
Come from outside of the game

Do not feel evil is invincible
Most bodies they do claim
If you can preserve your immunity
You can consign them to the flame

Take your brains away from their recipes
And ponder on the current mores
Fight the dark side internally
And victory shall be yours

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, October 30, 2009

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Comments about Victory Shall Be Yours! by Deodath Debideen

  • Ejaz Khan (11/6/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    A message, well conceived, well delivered, with an apparent clarity. On the whole your perception seems to be intact and carries weigh of logic and glimpse of truth.
    You're absolutely right that we live in very special era, where opposing forces await a final combat, you have written an inspirational piece, congratulations on completing a beautiful and needed work!

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  • Antonio Liao (11/3/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    a thundering faith leads every soul to victory....your already a victor to any
    cuts of evil....just like the mustard seeds that lives in your heart, then salvation are
    guaranteed....a sweeten melody of faith, guide with belief that leads to eternity
    ....thank you for sharing and God bless.... a big star and a 10 +++

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  • Indira Babbellapati (11/1/2009 10:33:00 AM)

    basically religions are social constructs...truth has nothing to do with religion. i salute ur profound wisdom...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    Take your brains away from their recipes
    And ponder on the current mores
    Fight the dark side internally
    And victory shall be yours.good c ounsel and intelleence must prevail and take thecourse or decide the action. his is only way out for corrective mesure and happiness....10

    reading is so interesting and full of wisdon prevails inall the poems....

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/30/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    Do not feel evil is invincible
    Most bodies they do claim
    If you can preserve your immunity
    You can consign them to the flame.....10+


    i agree with you...

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  • Rakesh Bedi (10/30/2009 1:12:00 AM)

    the concluding two lines constitute a philosophy worth a whole human life...... a truth which usually is overseen in the superficiality of the outer world....

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  • Antonio Liao (10/30/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    as i close my eyes wonder each lines of your poem.....'you have touch my heart and i have grown”.....a reflective mood wish my desire to read more and more
    to sharpen some of the intricacies of my faith.....thank you my dear friend...God bless your poem...a 10 +

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/30/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Religion is man's creation
    Limited truth they do give
    a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/30/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Religion is man's creation
    Limited truth they do give
    a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan

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