Victory Shall Be Yours! Poem by Deodath Debideen
Victory Shall Be Yours!
Holy books offer TIPS
On how we should live
Religion is man's creation
Limited truth they do give
Eras change and answers too
So what about the present
We're stuck with past recipes
Though, for NOW, there's no precedent
Krishna said to fight the evil
As an instrument of God
Do the action in surrender
No thought of personal reward
Prepare yourself for the battlefield
The blue-skinned Krishna said
Attachment and desires... all conquered
Will see the Kauravas all dead
The Mahabharat hid the deepest truth
That in the body is a dark side entity
Who attaches, desires and doth scheme
The soul has no such quality
The Bible is deceptive also
Written after AD 325
Put away your sword, my disciple
Was only so you could survive
Eras change and the guidance changes
Yet, the Gita tells you true
If you do not fight back
No heaven or Earth for you
Evil deceives in its war
Against the GOOD of Earth' firmament
TEACHERS and TESTERS, sure they are
When FORCE is their argument
Sure, put your nuclear devices away
Who live by those, die by radiations
Hiroshima and Nagasaki know the score
Nothing doing from nuclear nations
Evil hurts then harries the victim
For forgiveness and goodwill
While walking away with crime accomplished
Pretending that man can usurp God's skill
Old books offer only some help
Intelligence must find the rest
Priestcraft says there's no greater truth
Tips from bygone eras, they rate as the best
Today is unique among the times
Yet evil is always the same
New ways of defeating the the dark side
Come from outside of the game
Do not feel evil is invincible
Most bodies they do claim
If you can preserve your immunity
You can consign them to the flame
Take your brains away from their recipes
And ponder on the current mores
Fight the dark side internally
And victory shall be yours
Religion is man's creation Limited truth they do give a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan
as i close my eyes wonder each lines of your poem.....'you have touch my heart and i have grown”.....a reflective mood wish my desire to read more and more to sharpen some of the intricacies of my faith.....thank you my dear friend...God bless your poem...a 10 +
the concluding two lines constitute a philosophy worth a whole human life...... a truth which usually is overseen in the superficiality of the outer world....
A message, well conceived, well delivered, with an apparent clarity. On the whole your perception seems to be intact and carries weigh of logic and glimpse of truth. You're absolutely right that we live in very special era, where opposing forces await a final combat, you have written an inspirational piece, congratulations on completing a beautiful and needed work!
a thundering faith leads every soul to victory....your already a victor to any cuts of evil....just like the mustard seeds that lives in your heart, then salvation are guaranteed....a sweeten melody of faith, guide with belief that leads to eternity ....thank you for sharing and God bless.... a big star and a 10 +++
basically religions are social constructs...truth has nothing to do with religion. i salute ur profound wisdom...
Take your brains away from their recipes And ponder on the current mores Fight the dark side internally And victory shall be yours.good c ounsel and intelleence must prevail and take thecourse or decide the action. his is only way out for corrective mesure and happiness....10 reading is so interesting and full of wisdon prevails inall the poems....
Do not feel evil is invincible Most bodies they do claim If you can preserve your immunity You can consign them to the flame.....10+ i agree with you...
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I would like to translate this poem
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Religion is man's creation Limited truth they do give a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan