Vision In Progress Poem by Matt Starking
Vision In Progress
Amidst the chaos of my soul,
A vision takes hold.
A dream born from within,
A story waiting to unfold.
A world of wonder and beauty,
Where love and peace prevail.
A place where kindness is currency,
And hate and anger fade.
The colors vivid and bold,
The scenery, breathtaking and wild.
The air, crisp and pure,
And the breeze, gentle and mild.
The people, diverse and unique,
Yet united in their shared quest.
To build a world that they seek,
Where everyone feels at rest.
But this vision is still in progress,
A work in constant motion.
It takes effort and dedication,
To bring it to fruition.
So I work each day with purpose,
For this vision to become real.
And with every step I take,
I move closer to its ideal.
For I know that anything is possible,
If I believe and manifest.
And with this vision as my guide,
My life will be forever blessed.
I enjoyed the rhyming but did NOT mind that it did NOT rhyme throughout.
(cont.) But this poem is entertaining and not harmful (I think) , so....it's a 'step in the right direction'. 5 stars. ;) bri
stanza 7: MANIFEST, as a transitive verb, has this definition: 'to make evident or certain by showing or displaying' I think this is creative poetry and most likely 'wishful thinking', with little chance ok having 'peace and love' prevail. : (
A world of wonder and beauty, Where love and peace prevail. A place where kindness is currency, And hate and anger fade.... Love these lines. A beautiful poem is well executed. Five stars.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 7:27:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Congratulations on POD. Enjoyed the sublime poetry, with nice rhyme and rhythm.