Voids Which Can Never Be Filled Poem by Ted Sheridan

Voids Which Can Never Be Filled

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Having only ever experienced love in a room dark with suspicions
She really had no clue as to the depth of the incisions love can make
When preformed by a surgeon who knows how to cut
Or the drunkeness it can induce
When mixed by a deceptive hand and then
Sipped on an empty heart
No one ever explained to her in terms she could fully understand
How impossible it is to meet the needs and demands
Of someone outside of oneself
Happiness is so elusive and just another void
Created by a need for loving and for being loved
It will always be confused for that which it is not...Love itself
And while loving someone only fills the void for awhile
It does not, cannot and will never replace it
The void is always there
Constantly demanding to be filled
Like a pothole of the soul....
And no one has a shovel....
Having only ever experienced love in a room dark with suspicions
She really had no clue....

2007 © T Sheridan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 14 September 2007

This is such a sad tale, Ted. And one that has many parallels in our western world of instant gratification and me me me. Rich with irony, there is surely something personal in your tale, methinks. Excellent penning. love, Allie xxxx

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Patricia Gale 13 September 2007

I must agree... so true

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Packing a punch with a lot of truth mixed in as ever. You're the highlight of the day here as ever... t x

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Hubcap Shithead 13 September 2007

The void is always there Constantly demanding to be filled Like a pothole of the soul.... And no one has a shovel.... Having only ever experienced love in a room dark with suspicions She really had no clue.... you really have a way with words like apooter on a potters wheel, , you mould emotions into poetic thoughts..

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