Volcano Poem by Valerie Dohren

Strong.Diction praiseworthy.

Great poem again Val :)

Waterfall and Volcano two straight to the point poems. I like the way you write.

THE POEM CALM MY MIND AND GIVES A PLEASURE TO MY SOUL…………………………………. THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

THE POEM CALM MY MIND AND GIVES A PLEASURE TO MY SOUL…………………………………. THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

Titi ka okeh kayo lameh ㅏㅁ 휘

A short and powerful poem. Like it.

Very true! unkind words can burn like the sulphrous lava from a volcano!

Your way of morphing natural occurences into human emotions is excellent. Stunning even.

nice, i liked it...i will def check out a few more. i am new to the site, but i like what i see so far