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Volcano (Haiku)

Rating: 4.3

A volcano is
Eruption, devastation
Or dormant, and dead

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Thursday, July 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: natural disasters,nature
Its my first Haiku ever so go a little easy on me dear friends :) Just let me know if the form is correct.
Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2015

A wonderful Haiku, Volcano created mountains and let us knew that a lot of wealth is inside the earth.

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Ayman Parray 27 December 2015

Yes sir you are right but when I was writing the particular Haiku, and thinking about it the first thing that came to my mind was the destruction caused by volcanoes.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 25 September 2015

Wonderful volcano haiku the speaks about your wonderful imagery shared here. Very nice sharing...10

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Ayman Parray 03 October 2015

Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.

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Valsa George 11 August 2015

5- 7- 5 is the syllable count of a conventional haiku! But now, no hard and fast rules are there, except that it should have an image of the natural world! As your first attempt, this attempt is praise worthy!

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Ayman Parray 14 August 2015

Thank you so much Valsa, for educating me in the art of a Haiku.

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Kelly Kurt 09 July 2015

The last line was one syllable short, but other than that it fulfilled the requirements nicely

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Ayman Parray 09 July 2015

Thank you my dear friend :) You are the best

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