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Wife Beater (Limerick)

Rating: 4.5

There was once a fat, ugly, wife beater
He was also a drunk and a cheater
His chair a hot iron rod
Made by the will of God
His ass got burned badly on that heater

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Saturday, July 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous
My first Limerick. For Kelly Kurt
Mike Smith 12 March 2016

God was perhaps too kind. Violence perpetrated against anyone ever is deplorable. To use it against a spouse is far beyond that. Luckily your poem avoids getting too depressing because 1. Justice is served 2. Limericks are just fun Nicely done Ayman

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2016

Interesting, enjoyed it..................................................

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Ayman Parray 24 January 2016

Thanks, I hope you enjoyed Bri's comment below as well. :)

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Bri Edwards 17 December 2015

not bad for a 'first limerick'! rhyming and meter seem good. some would say the content is not 'limerick material' perhaps, but i like it enough! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what was god thinking! ? ? Though he was fat, he could have been thin. All sorts of 'men' are capable of sin. God did what gods sometimes do. [God did make quite a few.] THAT 'man' should have gone in the 'reject' bin! ! bri :)

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Ayman Parray 19 December 2015

Bri, so good to see a comment from you. Thank you.

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Souren Mondal 15 December 2015

A brilliantly crafted limmerick Ayman. Fusing humour with seriousness is always a tough job that you did almost effortlessly.. Thanks for sharing..

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Ayman Parray 15 December 2015

Thank you Souren.

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Valsa George 09 August 2015

Ha..... ha! ......... It's fun! Besides you like to remind everyone that the wicked shall be punished! !

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Ayman Parray 09 August 2015

Thanks Valsa. This is a favourite Limerick of mine.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2015

Deep envision. Wife beater must be punished by sitting on a hot iron rod. Many thanks dear Ayman keep the ball rolling.

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Ayman Parray 12 July 2015

Thank you too sir for taking the time to read and appreciate. Gratitude.

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Kelly Kurt 11 July 2015

Fun, yet serious limerick my friend. May all wife-beaters sit on a hot iron rod

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Ayman Parray 12 July 2015

So my dearest fellow poet and best pal on Ph did u like the dedication part. The truth is I learned the love of a Limerick from your Limericks. Thank you.

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