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Alone In The Dark

Rating: 4.5
Alone in the dark, in darkness and doubt,
The mind is a maze, no good thought can sprout
Deep down below in the blackest of holes,
Your sins drag you to hell; the weight on your souls
No ray of light can reach you,
The air you breathe poisons you
The prince of darkness reigns supreme,
No one in the darkness can hear you scream
He reigns over your body, mind and soul,
His breath burns you whole
He lashes with the tail,
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Wednesday, June 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,dark,darkness,god,solitude
Nosheen Irfan 04 February 2016
Skepticism strikes us when we are alone n hopeless. You have presented the feeling of doubt with great clarity. No one should be, Alone in the dark is a very meaningful line, with A in capital which is intentional on the poet's part. A work of mature mind n intellect.10
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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2015
Doubt, lack of faith and despair are like demons which kill the spirit and plunge one to darkness.Faith in oneself, faith in God and His creations can lead us to light and hope.There is an earnest desire in your poem to seek the blessings of God.
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Ayman Parray 31 October 2015
Thank you Bharati, for your insightful review.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 August 2015
Great write, Truly, man cannot live in darkness, he needs both physical light and spiritual light. Living in darkness away from SL means spoiling the purpose of God Let's all save ourselves from it Loved reading and commenting
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Ayman Parray 20 December 2015
Thanks, Abdulrazak. Gratitude.
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Allotey Abossey 10 August 2015
Very well depicted Ayman, the truth is: darkness cannot comprehend the presence of light. And yes God is able to save. Good work. Stay blessed
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Ayman Parray 10 August 2015
Thank you my friend. God is the most mighty, merciful, benevolent, beneficent and so much more.
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Nel Omofolarin 27 July 2015
Yes no man deserves to be alone in the dark....this is a deep & thoughtful..thanks for sharing
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Ayman Parray 27 July 2015
Yes no one does indeed Nel. Thank you too
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Valsa George 27 July 2015
Stay away from darkness..... Evil and danger lurk there! Move into light! If one cannot do it, seek heavenly providence! In this poem, I hear the wailing of a soul that wants to be redeemed! Great write, Ayman!
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Ayman Parray 27 July 2015
Thank you for the inspiring advice Valsa and your concern. Sometimes one gets used to darkness or ones path is surrounded by it. Evil and danger are horrible things and need to be avoided.
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Ayman Parray 27 July 2015
Your wonderful poetry, Valsa- comes from your beautiful soul. You understood me perfectly. And your comment it kept ringing in my head like a beautiful melody or soothing me like a balm. That is why I wrote what I just did. Thanks a lot.
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A compelling and creative cry for salvation and companionship. Well done my friend!
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Ayman Parray 07 June 2015
Howard, your kind words are truly motivating. Thank you.
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Ken E Hall 05 June 2015
Creative poem certainly the dark is the devils hunting ground but thanks to the cross of Jesus will make him run, mind gripping thoughts you bring...thanks and regards
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Ayman Parray 06 June 2015
Thanks Ken, for taking the time to read and review.
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Kelly Kurt 04 June 2015
A deep and gripping poem, Ayman.
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Ayman Parray 04 June 2015
Thank you sir. You help me understand poetry.
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