Voyage Poem by Rachel Butler

Voyage

Rating: 4.1


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


With aplomb you are victorious afore embarking on life’s winding road.
Devoid of aplomb in soul, self is twofold conquered in the game of life.

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 26 October 2011

Lots of food for thought here, loved the way you put so much and succinctly into such a small space. Paul

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Andrew Blakemore 28 October 2011

A very thought provoking piece Rachel, well done.

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Romeo Della Valle 30 October 2011

As always, my dear friend Rachel, beauty radiates majestically through all your writes like this one now! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! RDV from NYC...

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Renu Kakkar 30 September 2015

Good poem. Good things come in small packages.

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Hazel Durham 22 September 2015

Superb write Rachel, with such creativity you express with great panache!

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Ken E Hall 27 July 2015

The game of life so different for so many souls a plus for many that can conquer it and it does need money but plenty of love...regards

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Raymond Farrell 26 July 2015

Succinct but packed full of serious thought. Need to spend a little while meditating on this one.

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Paul Butters 13 November 2011

Neat poem. My Mum is a gardener for sure.

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