Waiting Poem by Heather Burns

Waiting

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Locked in the intensity
of time

I fought for a release
none was to be found

standing motionless
waiting for a tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with a patience that promises possibilities.

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Soulful Heart 13 December 2013

waiting and hoping are the two endless facts of our life and the summary of our life is for what things we wait and hope.............those are the choice of individual being...........short and epitome...

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 December 2013

Beautiful poem. Waiting will never go in vain, as tomorrow is yet to come.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

Feeling of helplessness of human beings is expressed in clear words. Thank you.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 10 December 2013

Eyes are aching for a better tomorrow! Fortune shall bloom at any time! Waiting will not go in vain!

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