Waiting For You Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Waiting For You

Rating: 4.6


Remained Awake,
Kept my doors open,
Al-through the night,
Perhaps sometimes
You might resolve
To return to me...

Alas! In the morning
I found the White sheet
Of my infinite awaiting,
Like the shattered heart,
The bed of my nights
Bathed with dreams
Is still like a blank paper
And untouched, Virgin.

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 17 April 2016

A heartfelt drop! ! waiting for ones lover to arrive and fall into arms. Spilling of emotion is thick here. Liked it.

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Thank you Sir for your encouraging words.

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Beauty of love expressed in finest poetical words which is the rare quality of exceptionally talented ones.

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I feel highly flattered sir when I hear this from a poet of your order, Sir. Thanks a lot from my heart for the words of inspiration and the gracious visit to my page. Anticipating a few more visits and Namaskar. Subhas

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soumya 01 December 2017

Alas! In the morning I found the White sheet Of my infinite awaiting, Like the shattered heart, The bed of my nights Bathed with dreams Is still like a blank paper And untouched, Virgin. Thanks for shared29+++++

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Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

In the morning I found the White sheet Of my infinite awaiting, Like the shattered heart, The bed of my nights Bathed with dreams Is still like a blank paper And untouched, Virgin. Thrilling and heart touching. Thanks.10 marks for it.

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Nicely expressed, enjoyed reading sir.

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Anita Aparajita Das 16 May 2016

I could feel the pain.. loneliness gradually takes away into a new and different world.. Good poem. Thanks for it. Nitu

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Seema Sharma Rimi 28 April 2016

ke the shattered heart, The bed of my nights Bathed with dreams Is still like a blank paper And untouched, Virgin. The pain of separation tortures you to sucu extent that you feel like fish out of water. May God reunite you someday somewhere. Thanks Sir for the lovely poem.10 has to be awarded. Seema Devi

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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