Wake Me At Dawn (Haiku) Poem by Angelic Warrior

Wake Me At Dawn (Haiku)

Rating: 4.1


Dawn breaks sweeps the land
Showering so gallantly
The calm surrender.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a true haiku, fantastic write... btw.. this is my favorite form.

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I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

nice how it retains meaning but isn't just a broken sentence. haiku's a tricky one...especially in english.

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