*sweet Release* Poem by Angelic Warrior

*sweet Release*

Rating: 3.4


In a world that is ruled by pompous idiots,
and marked by war and destruction,
anyone would search for release.

Somewhere were life doesn't matter,
where all are happy,
and earth is treated with respect.

People dream of this life,
but really never obtain it,
only a sad copy.

But in places untouched by humanity,
were plants thrive and animals rule,
the dream lives on.

Such places are dwindling,
population reeks control over wildlife,
let us help fight back.

Fight back, and look for relief,
look but don't touch,
and respect the ground you walk.

Only then can you find sweet release.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 09 October 2010

A very wise and well-expressed poem. Well done.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

Such places are dwindling, population reeks control over wildlife, let us help fight back. yes we are ecroaching ontheir hide outs.... making to come in opento beget killed.... so lovely write......10 read mine global warming.... whyare we unkind to nature

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Crystle Jones 18 June 2009

haha. completely agree with this one! great job! ! ! ! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Keith Parsons 07 June 2009

Leslie and Angelic...I think we are all in agreement...raise the consciousness!

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we have some similar feelings.. read Humanity by me, you woudl see

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