Poemahontas Poemadonna


Walking Alone 1 - Poem by Poemahontas Poemadonna

Walking alone
I discovered myself
I talked to God
I asked for help

My heart is troubled
The load is heavy
My sins have doubled
The pain is steady

These problems I'm facing
Are beyond my control
A victim to temptations
I'm another lost soul

Can You show me a sign
Because my eyes are blind
Give me the strength
This mountain I'll climb

I'll follow Your ways
Far away from home
When I walk with You
I'm never walking alone

Topic(s) of this poem: faith, fears, prayers, trials, walking


Comments about Walking Alone 1 by Poemahontas Poemadonna

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/5/2017 8:21:00 PM)


    When i walk with you
    i am never alone.
    oh show me the way
    this is a beautiful poetic prayer. thank you very much dear poet
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  • (8/30/2016 4:21:00 AM)


    Very profound...love it! A 10! (Report) Reply

    Poemahontas Poemadonna Poemahontas Poemadonna (9/1/2016 6:45:00 AM)

    Thank you for your kind review

  • (8/23/2016 10:08:00 PM)


    Quietly conveys the message while attaining great depth and sensibility.
    Very good.
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    Poemahontas Poemadonna Poemahontas Poemadonna (9/1/2016 6:46:00 AM)

    Thank you Sandra for reading and your feedback

  • Soul Watcher (1/18/2016 3:51:00 AM)


    That's very nice Chelsea.

    My best lines:

    I'll follow Your ways
    Far away from home
    When I walk with You
    I'm never walking alone

    Cannot agree with this more.
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    Poemahontas Poemadonna Poemahontas Poemadonna (9/1/2016 6:47:00 AM)

    Thank you for this awesome review and feedback

  • (1/17/2016 11:02:00 PM)


    A beautiful prayer with profound thoughts about faith in Him and urging the God to show the right path to lead a meaningful life. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

    Poemahontas Poemadonna Poemahontas Poemadonna (1/17/2016 11:13:00 PM)

    Awesome review thank you

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, May 26, 2017


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