Walking Alone 1 Poem by Poemahontas Poemadonna

Walking Alone 1

Rating: 4.6


Walking alone
I discovered myself
I talked to God
I asked for help

My heart is troubled
The load is heavy
My sins have doubled
The pain is steady

These problems I'm facing
Are beyond my control
A victim to temptations
I'm another lost soul

Can You show me a sign
Because my eyes are blind
Give me the strength
This mountain I'll climb

I'll follow Your ways
Far away from home
When I walk with You
I'm never walking alone

Walking Alone 1
Sunday, January 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,fears,prayers,trials,walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 18 January 2016

That's very nice Chelsea. My best lines: I'll follow Your ways Far away from home When I walk with You I'm never walking alone Cannot agree with this more.

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Poemahontas Poemadonna 01 September 2016

Thank you for this awesome review and feedback

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 January 2016

A beautiful prayer with profound thoughts about faith in Him and urging the God to show the right path to lead a meaningful life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Denis Mair 25 June 2019

You'll have readers walking with the two of you.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2018

God is always with us. In the mirror of my heart is a prtrait, I see Him whenever I bow my head, I kiss Him whenever I bow my head. I am never alone. A lovely spiritual poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 April 2017

When i walk with you i am never alone. oh show me the way this is a beautiful poetic prayer. thank you very much dear poet

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Theodora Onken 30 August 2016

Very profound...love it! A 10!

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Poemahontas Poemadonna 01 September 2016

Thank you for your kind review

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Sandra Feldman 23 August 2016

Quietly conveys the message while attaining great depth and sensibility. Very good.

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Poemahontas Poemadonna 01 September 2016

Thank you Sandra for reading and your feedback

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