Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Walking In Jerusalem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking the Roman Roads
Darkened mist uniting the young and old

A scared silence with an eerie wind
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Manonton Dalan 07 November 2015

history coming back...great

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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Souren Mondal 20 October 2015

A very well written poem that depicts the 'evils' of our present day, but ends with hope.. Indeed we still have or at least should strive to have hope in your hearts for things to change....

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Nidal Habash 22 October 2015

thank you for your kind words...Evil can be conquered with hope.. and would like to see more of it

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 October 2015

'' I thought the scriptures are crystal clear Don't kill your brothers and sisters Cherish the earth and sun with what you hold dear But all I have seen is hatred and fear The Earth in Mourning and the sun is a shadow of her peers'' yes.. and what we see is hatred and fear growing day after day.. Thank you, Nidal. Welcome at P.H. and keep on writing Blessings Fabrizio

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you for your kind words...Troubled world we are in... Hope cooler heads prevail..

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

Scary stuff, Nidal. Well written. Thanks

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you for your feed back.. we do live in a troubled world..

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Sandra Feldman 20 October 2015

Excellent poem of shinning truth All belligerents should read

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you...people need to look past their religious heritage and start looking at each other as humans.. the world will be a better place for it.

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