Chrishtiana Reed

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Walls Closing In - Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

I lay in a dark room asleep when all of the sudden i feel a light breeze. I woke up in a room whare darkness surrounds. I look to see if i can see anyone or anything.

but yet nothing.

All i see is four walls, a door and a cieling. Again the breeze comes, it's coming from the cracks of the door. i finally could make out one thing..... It was a little light comming from the door as well.

I run trying to find a way out. The door is locked, im out of luck. I bang on the door screaming ' Is anyone there? ' 'Someone save me! 'No answer.

I go back to whare i first was. I sit in the corner crying.... All of the sudden i hear a noise, i look up to see that the walls of this room closing in on me. I screa and yell 'Save me! ' 'I'm in here! ' as i pounce on the walls and the door.

But yet nothing....

I's getting darker, the walls are comming in closer and closer. I sit in the room crying. I'm all alone. no one is there. Iguess im stuck here forever...

The walls are 2 feet away from me, i scream one last time but yet nothing...
The walls finally close in allthe way. They pull apart and there i am laying there on the floor dead.

All the sudden i opem my eyes to see itr was nothing but a dream. As the feeling of relief comes upon me, i fall asleep once more.

But this time, for eternity....


Comments about Walls Closing In by Chrishtiana Reed

  • (1/6/2012 6:32:00 PM)

    wow i was interested from the first line to the end! its like reading a great book you never want to put down! its really good. just watch spelling and typos keep the good work coming! (Report)Reply

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  • Chidori Storm (1/3/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    All I can say, is Wow. This poem is big. You should keep writing. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2011 1:43:00 AM)

    Yup....
    same situation here.
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  • (11/18/2011 8:32:00 PM)

    ll the sudden i opem my eyes to see itr was nothing but a dream. As the feeling of relief comes upon m
    good to read
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  • (11/15/2011 6:30:00 PM)

    hey sweety i hope you no i love ya your to cool of a person just to give it up you have a lot to live for love your poem (Report)Reply

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  • Abdallah Gamal (11/11/2011 2:12:00 PM)

    Incredible! I reacted with this poem as if I were in the same situation, you conveyed your story of your dream through little words for me it take a while for reacting with this moment and live in it, amazing poem, a gr8 piece of work :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 12, 2011


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