Wandering Mind. Poem by Y Sunita Devi

Wandering Mind.



It was one of my crucial moments of my life,
Sitting still on a soft cushion,
In the silence of the dark night.

My utmost desire at that point,
Was to persuade my wandering mind,
To put an end to its wandering action.

I found it the most dominant,
Almost impossible to dominate.




28/03/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

just track its path.. a wondering mind is not necessarily a bad thing.

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Ted M 28 August 2009

When the heart dominates and forces the mind to wander, then it's beyond control. The situation presented in a artful way...........10

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Sebastine Humaemo 12 August 2009

suddnly yu made yur mind...controlled n bright.....thre stood te real you....askin yu to go on n move...smilin yu stood n walked...sayin t happns always...why to care n get lost....10++ sebastine...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

inner reflection of mind and heart! keep writing!

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Kesav Easwaran 31 March 2009

let your mind wander...will bring in tears and treasures...artful write...10

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