Wanting Poem by Sandra Feldman

Wanting

Rating: 5.0


I want to cross the mountains.
I want to cross the sea,
I want you here forever,
Together, just with me.

I know this stupid stanza,
Can never, never be,
But Dreams are the bonanza,
Of those who drown at sea.

Monday, October 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: mountains,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 01 October 2012

Thank you, Nurian for the wonderful compliments.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 01 October 2012

Wonderful, you make writing seem so easy with this piece. And the way you ended it with dreams being a bonanza to those who drown at sea is brilliant. Thumbs up.

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