Wanting More Of Life Poem by Old Teenage Poems

Wanting More Of Life

Rating: 4.5


Wanting more of life
Than to live from dust to dust
Trying to truly live
Never neglegating love to lust

Thinking that a Later comes along
and yesterday is over due
We need to think forward
To make our dreams come true

There's always the possibility of Later
The hopings for something more
Maby the understanding
Of more than you are sure

Sometimes it is the prospect Later
That makes the present bloom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Saveley 02 August 2007

'Wanting more of life Than to live from dust to dust...' That's really brilliant. Definitely understand that feeling, that desperate NEED to do more than you are negated to do... And that struggle with what might come after, that is something I think everyone can relate to, whether they know it or not... 'Sometimes it is the prospect Later That makes the present bloom.' This is incredibly true, also. Sometimes, regardless of whether we are certain that this future exists for us, the very IDEA, the CONCEPT, that it is possible, that makes everything seem brighter. The day is only darkest When it seems tomorrow's to never come...

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Bonnie Harding 01 August 2007

nicely written Agnes, a pleasure to read

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