War Poem by Najibur Rahman

War

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Fathers, sons, brothers
Mothers, daughters, sisters

War did come and war did take
Followed by a mournful wake

The sounds of people screaming, dying
Horses puking, children slaying

Lonely soldier marching onward
Burdened bodies moving forward

Carmine ground, twisted earth
Human life devoid of worth

Fire and ash rained all day
Much to the warriors' growing dismay

"For king and country", came a spirited cry
Young, wide-eyed troopers did not know why

When all that beckoned was doom and gloom
The trumpet sounded with a thunderous boom

When all that transpired was said and done
Mistress death with reapers come

Troopers sprawled with transfixed eyes
Seemed like death was playing dice

What honor does this fate entail?
When all we do is always fail

Monday, November 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: brothers,daughters,fathers,mothers,soldier,sons,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 06 November 2018

Those 2 closing lines were incredible. Thank you for sharing this powerful piece.

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Najibur Rahman 08 November 2018

You are very welcome. This was one of my first poems, I'm so glad you liked it

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Chinedu Dike 06 November 2018

Brave utterances set aside for sober reflection. An insightful piece of poetry nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Najibur.

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Najibur Rahman 08 November 2018

Thank you for your kind words, i really appreciate it

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 November 2018

Troopers sprawled with transfixed eyes Seemed like death was playing dice What honor does this fate entail? When all we do is always fail.....War is so destructive of everything......your cry agains the war is simply marvelous. thank u dear poet for writing abou this subject. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Najibur. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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