War In Brain Poem by Varsha M

War In Brain

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The russet of brown leaves
Down, as a sheet over crust;
Perfectly accompanying,
The hovering thoughts,
I was drenched in

Walking through the aisle
Amidst the crowded street,
Yet, unaware of all that's happening;
Soughting the cobweb,
Thought jungle spew.

Like a jigsaws, shredding me,
Amidst the wise and unwise lot,
Churning me, to draw the last drop dribbling;
Imprisoned, like a dumb,
I lay there, in thoughts, difficult.

War In Brain
Sunday, January 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: war,fight,choice,decision
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I picked up this word from Rose Marie Juan Austin poem my mother's quilt. As I read this poem I was carried by such feelings in autumn season and so I penned these dry leaves and thought war here in this poetry. Photo courtesy Joy Real on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 January 2021

I love the way you described a pensive mood, using fall leaves and other charming imagery. Well done!

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Kostas Lagos 17 January 2021

When we get absorbed in our thoughts. Well penned

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