War's Aftermath - Inspired By Blue By M.J. Lemon Poem by Richard Wlodarski

War's Aftermath - Inspired By Blue By M.J. Lemon

Rating: 5.0


He hit her in such moment
Of vulnerability
An episode of such stress
Triggered by PTSD

Her tears in swollen eyes
Reminding him of sniper
Mere child scared to death
Bawling as he wipes her out

She understands his pain
And suffering she tries
To be so courageous
With such a crippled life

He can't understand her love
It's been totally replaced
With such fear and damn rage
He prays for meeting in heaven

Thursday, December 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: abuse,abused,stress
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am indebted to M.J. Lemon for his continued inspiration!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 15 December 2018

So much intensity for a broken life, war and it's after effects are truly a on earth - a 10

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Mj Lemon 13 December 2018

Richard, this is absolutely amazing. Yes, I understand that PTSD does cause memory problems, perhaps to the point that the person suffering can no longer understand any motivation for behaviour. This poem, particularly that last stanza, captures this dark, stark reality. This one goes to myfavourites.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 December 2018

M.J., I am humbled and greatly flattered. Thank you so much for the inspiration!

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