egi david perdana

********warlords (Blood Sky) (Lyric) *******

(egi/sulaiman)


Political passion tends to change the skies into an ocean
Robbed of all God’s destiny
Release rats of illusion
How much more lies need to be poured?
Heart beats were defeated in war
Confusion beckoned
Fighting merely for survival
Living far from the truth…
Peace lying weak amid all compactness'
He’s struggling for his lives
Stabbed off ridiculous thrust
Painting of blasphemy pictures
Wrapped with politeness and sweetness
He said “we’re comrades, but the lost comrades”
Complementing on each other
With poison kept in hands
Ego fed by the Master
Who was later clowned by the servants
When would this be end?
How many more lives to be served
On dinner plates...


Lives that pierce and penetrate the hearts
Curses being thrown to you
Harvester of war seeds
You grow them and run…
The pleasure you had gained out of others' tears
Burning the rocks of the Sun
To feel your adopted wolves that you've had freed
Are chewing you…
A slow death
Did you realized what you have done?
Don’t you have a heart any more?
I felt so upset
For the Prince of truth,
Who could be lying dead
On eternity plateau?


Black crows flying low above stinky corpses
Poured into wax mould
The drippings emit foul smells
The heat could have grinded the crying
But I still see you’re hiding behind the moon
Laughing out loud at your victims,
Who’re starting to freeze?
Drinking up infant’s sweats from the Sun’s shadows
Fulfilling your wild urge
How many more would you sacrifice?
Using friends as your shield
From million of bullet
That comes your way
And the rains raining blood
Flooding your damned soul
Their bloods that you've poured into the mould

Open your eyes oh warlords!
The bloods you squeezed would submerge,
Your pride
And be thrown into the Black hole
Staying for long in Hell
Baptizing you…
Could you repay all the sins?
Your sins are larger than the flames of Hell!
How would you going to pay?


PS: egi write 70% words and egi have written the music and song
and mr sulaiman translate it on english language and write 30% words
the new colloboration, PEACE NOT WAR!
this poems inspirations from bob dylan song master of wars
master of war is the best protest song ever
if you want colloboration with me, please contact me


EGI DAVID PERDANA

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 23, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, March 28, 2009

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  • Drew StuffelsDrew Stuffels (1/4/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    thats deep bravo brotha! ! pretty good im flippin through them

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  • Truthful Light Treeclimber (12/29/2008 2:38:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful ode to peace! even though it's written as a bash on war.. you are incredibly talented please never stop gifting the world with your words of love

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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (12/28/2008 12:47:00 AM)

    This poem is a big protest against war and warlords. I hope these weapons of words will work.

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  • Jennifer Sollmann (12/27/2008 10:33:00 PM)

    omg. this is awesome! : ]

    and i totally agree, i hate war.

    yay for peace: ]

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (11/5/2008 7:52:00 AM)

    a great write with collaboration with Sulaiman..both of you are talented
    and made this poem wonderful...thumbs-up 10

    Ency Bearis

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  • Maliha Mirza (11/1/2008 8:17:00 AM)

    it is very very nice poem my friend also like it and thanks for writing coments

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  • Aijaz Asif (10/25/2008 5:24:00 AM)

    what a great collaboration....its a great and thought provoking piece....thanks for sharing 10++

    a story of 2 beautiful minds
    met together and become one of kind
    changing the thoughts of world in a way
    through stories hidden in verses and rhymes

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/23/2008 12:26:00 PM)

    'Could you repay all the sins?
    Your sins are larger than the flames of Hell!
    How would you going to pay? '

    Amazing amazing.
    10+

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  • C T Heart (10/23/2008 10:00:00 AM)

    hope one day i could hear this piece on a radio Egi...my cousin is a composer lyricist too...and i really appreciate your work...Great job! ! ! a 10

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/23/2008 9:40:00 AM)

    Hi my poetic pal.Thanks for the invitation to collaborate on this beauuuuuuuutiful piece.i 'd hope this piece could be like an evergreen piece of poetry which it could be remembered in years to come.Im honoured to have translated this piece to English Language and adding some spices to beautify it too.All the best to you in your quest Egi! ! !

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  • Howard Johnson (10/23/2008 9:02:00 AM)

    A very vivid piece, filled with an excellent choice of words for the readers enjoyment, I not sure what it would sound to music, It should be intresting, thank you for sharing, David

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