James McLain

Gold Star - 40,646 Points (1958 - / From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By)

Was She Weak Or Was I Strong - Poem by James McLain

Was she weak or was I strong
I let her lead me in.
Out side her door I stood upright
narrow were the sides.

There I feel like no one else
here elsewhere I am not.
So was I week or was she strong
I can not show a doubt.

Topic(s) of this poem: green

Comments about Was She Weak Or Was I Strong by James McLain

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/27/2015 1:18:00 PM)

    Very amazing drafting shared really. Wisely drafted poem shared.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/27/2015 12:54:00 PM)

    This is for you to decide who was weak and who was strong yet poem was strong enough for 10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015

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