Water Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Water

Rating: 4.8


You may agree or may not,
It's my thinking,
I may be right,
I may be wrong,
The need of time,
Is to be elastic,
And a little realistic!

I see a dispute of water,
We both need it.
We both need our resources,
To be exploited,
For welfare of the children,
And to launch a war,
Jointly against,
Mosquitoes, insects and reptiles!

Let the water be distributed,
Honestly in two neighbors,
Close enough we may come,
With many common joys,
Everything is possible,
But to extinguish the fire,
It's water that is needed,
Scarcity of water will make difficult,
To extinguish the fire,
That may turn,
Women and children,
Into coal and ashes!
You have a powerful sucking pump,
Your family is large,
My family is small,
Just close your pump,
Four hours a day,
I'm sure we can live,
Like friends and good neighbors.

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Water the drink of Adam!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Fitzpatrick 02 January 2015

I like the storyline, but I have a feeling English is not your first language so you may read even better in another.

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

Often neighbours can have similar issues propping up among them.....especially on basic necessities like water! With a little adjustment and tolerance, such disputes and the resultant ill will can be amicably settled! A beautiful poem on the problems faced in practical life! |

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Hazel Durham 03 January 2015

Beautiful write, with understanding and compromise we can live together in a fair and peaceful society!

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 January 2015

A symbolic poem................10

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Khalid Saifullah 01 January 2015

A great symbolic write............10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Honestly like friends and good neighbours. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Piyush Dey 08 January 2015

Very fine lines. Written as if words have just come out of your heart.

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

great work....really very nice...like it

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Soulful Heart 05 January 2015

the selfish strife of human wants well depicted with the metaphor of water...................quiet punching of truth

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Amitava Sur 04 January 2015

A beautiful exposition of an issue. If you like to live a peaceful life in the society, there should be peaceful coexistence. Both have to leave a little and at the same time have to share also for benefit of both. Thanks for sharing.

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