Water - Νερό Poem by Kostas Lagos

Water - Νερό

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So faithful I was

trying to walk on water

got soaked at the end



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Friday, September 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,faith,humor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 September 2019

A brilliant poem Kostas! A Senryu - slippery as the water yet full of humour.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 September 2019

Amazing poem with a meaningful message. So brilliantly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Following to the last dot her words is your destiny, getting wet your fate. Good humour.

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Bill Cantrell 20 September 2019

Maybe the water didn’t have enough faith? Love the humor, great write Kostas!

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