Water Picture Poem by May Swenson
Water Picture
In the pond in the park
all things are doubled:
Long buildings hang and
wriggle gently. Chimneys
are bent legs bouncing
on clouds below. A flag
wags like a fishhook
down there in the sky.
The arched stone bridge
is an eye, with underlid
in the water. In its lens
dip crinkled heads with hats
that don't fall off. Dogs go by,
barking on their backs.
A baby, taken to feed the
ducks, dangles upside-down,
a pink balloon for a buoy.
Treetops deploy a haze of
cherry bloom for roots,
where birds coast belly-up
in the glass bowl of a hill;
from its bottom a bunch
of peanut-munching children
is suspended by their
sneakers, waveringly.
A swan, with twin necks
forming the figure 3,
steers between two dimpled
towers doubled. Fondly
hissing, she kisses herself,
and all the scene is troubled:
water-windows splinter,
tree-limbs tangle, the bridge
folds like a fan.
hehehehe you describe that scene so very well. How true your words are
So rich and imaginative one visual image transformed into this work of stellar work, the imagery is just bursting life and clarity. Deserves a higher rating then it currently has
This poem is really magnificent in its entirety. Staring into the water makes everything topsy turvy. A distorted image but an image nonetheless. A glorious write.
An inverted view of life That only a poet can paint so well looking at placid waters images in a dance so swell I welcome all ye poets reading this to my page too
CONGRATS being chosen again as the Modern poem of the day. The poetess invites readers to view the world from a different perspective. A very intriguing poem. TOP Marks!
Loved this upside down portrait! Loved the image of a swan with twin necks...An excellent poem....appreciated the theme, imagery and the setting of the poem!
there are the picture is crystal imaginative imagery; greatly written the poem
CONGRATS being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day! TOP Marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/2/2024 2:09:43 AM # 1.0.0
Swenson is definitely a poet for lovers of imagery: of which i'm one!