'' We Can Enjoy Your God Given Write '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' We Can Enjoy Your God Given Write ''

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Writing down your thoughts cleanses the soul,
It can help lift you out of life's goldfish bowl,
Though your words can enrage they may also console,
Never give up the fight.

Life is a challenge for those given the chance,
Your own and others you must try to enhance,
By writing what you feel your spirit you'll enhance,
You will also never lose sight.

You must never be afraid of honest critique,
Though some can make your future feel bleak,
Everyone in life has their troubles to seek,
The written word can and will bite.

Who's to say any poem is better than yours,
Words from the heart are usually what lures,
Others personal opinions are not what obscures,
The writers own inner light.

Never be put off by what people may say,
Some live their lives just to cause others affray,
You will live to fight another day,
Let the fire inside you ignite.

Criticism and praise can help you to learn,
As long as you show all others concern,
Both are attributes we all have to earn,
Your writing at times will incite.

Just remember your poems can cause distress,
If done truthfully your writing you can honestly express,
Regardless of whether it causes duress,
You'll have no need to feel uptight.

The written word can and does bring us joy,
As a weapon it can also be used to destroy,
If you just try your best not to annoy,

‘' We Can Enjoy Your God Given Write ‘'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 21 October 2012

Excellent - I don't believe in giving critiques unless I feel it would be constructive. Your poem is quite good enough - well said.

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