We Danced Poem by David Harris

We Danced

Rating: 5.0


Across the universe,
we danced amongst the stars,
made love on a crescent moon
halfway between Jupiter and Mars.
We danced away our dreams
until the daybreak call,
and then awoke to find
ourselves prisoners of our dreams,
never wanting to escape
back to the harsh reality
of our stagnant lives.

26 November 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Stirk 05 December 2009

Beautiful sentiment in this Astral esacapism. Much enjoyed Best Steve

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Sandra Martyres 26 November 2009

What a lovely dream David...I agree with Fay the lyrics would make a perfect song...10

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Fay Slimm 26 November 2009

Lovely lyrics to this David - - could be written as a song - - and we that love to dance will be thrilled with the read....10/10 Fay

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Carol Gall 26 November 2009

i would take 100 sleeping pills for that dream lol wondrrful thoughts 10

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David Harris

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