We Fell Apart... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

We Fell Apart...

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The day you left my life....
i realized that the whole world is mine
i feel alive with bounty of joy and freedom
i lost so much while being with you
i could recollect all that crazy jokes you played
to tame an innocent soul, by vindictive means
when i understood your honeybee nature
you are a traitor, evil and you are inseparable
i never wish to see you again
we fell apart; rather feel a... part!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
no more feel a part...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 04 July 2016

Life is meant to be loved and lived. If there's no freedom in love, love cannot find expressions of love. Love cannot be suffocated or controlled. Not demanded or even begged. I understand your poem expresses your in-depth feelings of lost. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.

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Well said is to live and let live, not to suffocate or control each other, welcome and thank you so much for hood suggestions in person, thanks again dear sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2016

To tame an innocent soul! Thanks for sharing.

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Life is a game of love as it's choice, but one is tamed fir the others fame, is exploitation of the dear innocent people, welcome for the comments and suggestions thanks again

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2016

Joy and freedom give real feeling to realize life in this world. But being apart from each other definitely gives pain.Wonderful poem is shared really.10

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I know feel apart is not the choice of all, but sometimes, it changes our life, shows our hidden potential to realise our dream, live for the one whom love you rather due for the one who wants you to die, thanks for ur dear comments sir.

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