We Were Alone! Poem by M D Dinesh Nair

We Were Alone!



I read it somewhere
'We are never alone and so you fight on'
And so I began my fight along with you by my side
And we were not alone I told you often.

There was some panic
But you and I were not alone.
Why you doubted what was true?
We could escape this beast of today
And we could race towards
The eastern dusk for a while.

Roaring civilization haunted us
But we were not alone.
Bullets would chase us
But our backs were backed by many more
Where would they strike?
I always asked for ourselves.

Jaws and claws of this beast
Might fight us but we need not fear, I thought so.
Were you listening?
I saw you bleeding at the back then.

I felt a shiver down my spines
You were still bleeding!
There was a bullet and a claw after me
And I was soon to collapse.

As you lay fallen down and
My back too beginning to bleed
I once more thought of muttering that
We were not alone.

But every one was alone!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 25 January 2014

The poem reminds me of Khap panchayats who always are after the blood of two lovers....poignant tale...last lines gives the poem a very deep meaning...happy reading and writing. :)

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Kanav Justa 24 January 2014

We were not alone. But every one was alone! ., , , an interesting write, , , liked it, , ,

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

Fight against the beasts must be done by few. Many may say they are with you but are always on sidelines. Nice poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 January 2014

How true said..... When the bullets chase from behind, no one could escape those...Surely it will pierce any one, and bleed anyone. In a sense everyone was alone! ! ! ! Beautiful poem once again from your pen...I read all your new poems...Though I didn't comment on it. Each one was unique in its own way..

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