We # You & I Poem by Ruby Mostazir

We # You & I



Together we are getting older
Life engulfed us with love
We overcome you death.....

Saturday, June 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 02 March 2020

When we are in love, the heaven smiles. A nice poem.

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

A beautiful poem, Ruby!

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Aranthabailu Ummar 02 August 2015

Eventhou it is four line poem it have many things to explain Its criticism will go for a book. You weaved from the beginning to end of the being. life starts it grows mixed with love and that love feeds us happiness as eel as sorrows some times one side is up and some times other side is up. some May fall some may raise up. It depends upon the ability of thinking as you said finally goes together. All gets older together. But at the end when we are in happy life can say over come the life. But actually no body can pass through it after a great up there must be a dust too any way you made us some thing to think. thanks for that and also keep on feed us some thing good like this masalama

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