About You........ Poem by Ruby Mostazir

About You........

Rating: 4.1


You must be cried
Heavy rain fall last night............




Tumi ki kado?
Tobe je akash ato brishti jhoray......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 10 December 2013

Ruby. I like these lines. So simple. And so lovely. May i add with smile! .. you must be cried.. heavy rain fall last night.. may you smile...: -) . but this depends on moods. dear i m not altering. your poem is complete and nice write. tenner peace..

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Ruby Mostazir 14 December 2013

@Muhammad Ali thnk you...its my pleasure :)

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Kanav Justa 15 December 2013

short and powerful, , nice, , ,

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Great connection as teardrops are really the rain from our heart.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Short and Sweet write...quiet a powerful words..Loved it.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 March 2019

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 December 2018

You must have cried a lot.............. heavy rain. short but meaningful dear poetess. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 November 2018

heavy rain as your cry, deep and powerful thank u dear poetess for your thinking.. tony

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Rajnish Manga 13 September 2018

Profound words used with brevity. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2017

Rain and tears.. beautifully crafted. Amusing and heart touching. Thanks for sharing.

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