Miss You Xx Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Miss You Xx

Rating: 4.5


When we are together
Constantly we fight
When we are apart
World seems depressed
Like a dark gloomy night......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2015

Very nicely and aptly envisioned which deeply expresses the love between two. Many thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 June 2018

O no, not I am aware of you or mine In time I live out of line Love goes away on the wave of saline at last - nothing I find have to live me out of mine greatly written 10++

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 October 2013

heart touch a poem with truth/ mirth in life 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Oh i can relate to dis nice fine short n sweet poem of lovelife! Pls do coment my latest poem. Fond regards.

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Kanav Justa 09 November 2013

.. lovely write.... wonderful

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me poet yeps poet 17 May 2021

TRY AND MIX UR XY with her xx u may then succeed to seed

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Chinedu Dike 25 November 2020

A concise and poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2020

Sweet and sour anecdotes sums up a relationship.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 06 September 2018

good writings......................................

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

Love is an state of helplessness, when we have no alternate but to live together, it's love.

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