Weathering Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Weathering

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Such is the case:
The first flowers of autumn,
the last of summer,
are asters, golden rod, and queen anne’s lace.

There is a changing of seasons
in your eyes, and all the reasons
are vague and disturbing—
I can see it in your face.

There’s a trace of a more rugged
blossom there—
a bloom that can bear
the coming chilly nights.

Permit me to stay by you,
for this disconcerting equinox
of mood. After the zinnias and phlox
are wilted, we’ll plant together
next years daffodils and hyacinths.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 July 2007

Very subtle and very beautiful, a weathering that is in tune with the changes of all the seasons. Superb write. Warm regards, SDandra

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Chris Mendros 15 July 2007

it was my father pointed out to me that goldenrods signaled the start of the school year. There's much more going on here, tho, an attempt to salvage something that seems to be fading like the season, something that should transcend the seasons. Dare i assume, a perennial? Nice work.

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