Weeping Goodbye Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Weeping Goodbye
At this dawn the final train is departed,
Taking pilgrims for holy visit to holy city
Eternity is remembered in this journey,
On both tracks in forest train has travelled.
Growing wild plants beside this railway,
They have given their best wishes to all,
Moment of holy goodbye is sorrowful,
Eyes of plants are filled with tear and love.
Leaves are eyes of plants, they have vision,
Seasonal light and rain they perceive in joy,
Train has moved ahead with care and hope,
Offering a flower of love they have turned.
Turing faces plants are weeping in separation.
Tear is falling from leaves like eyes of them,
Sorrowful goodbye flower is drinking tear,
Still all hope the train will return back in dusk.
Emotion is dropped from leaf as rain of grace,
Tear has fallen on beautiful wild yellow flower,
Plants have offered tears and flower to God,
During goodbye they have wished for success.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 October 2017. All rights reserved.
Goodbye gives emotion to separated or departed soul. Your poem makes me emotional and I cry for little while.
You are one wonderful poet who capture the landscape of nearby journey. Truly emotion is dropped from a leaf. This nice poem is too wonderful.
Goodbye's weeping motivates mind and brings emotion. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.
This poem has such a subtle softness of expression: I love the personification! The poet's sensibility to plants being separated from each other by the train, is most wonderful!
A flower of love they have turned! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Every morning I hear the train whistle early early in the morning and from childhood up I always wondered who was on that train and where they were going.... so your poem caught me up from the get-go putting a different destination in my mind.Loved the plants growing beside the tracks and what they gave to this poem!