Harsh Vardhan k

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Wen I Missed U - Poem by Harsh Vardhan k

wen i missed U, i felt helpless like a baby
who craved her mommy......

wen i missed U, i wanted to just cry
and asking to GOD why? ? ?

wen i missed U, i felt i'm lying on bed
but my soul was dead.........

wen i missed U, i felt my life became dark
and i wondered will i ever find any spark......

wen i missed U, i felt the stab of scare
and wished someone would care.........

wen i missed U, i felt like im dying
and thought on my death, will anyone be crying.......


Comments about Wen I Missed U by Harsh Vardhan k

  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/23/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    nice penning... it tells the story and, i thinks it`s the most important part in my commenting and your writing. good job, keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (10/23/2012 11:07:00 PM)

    Outburst of the the heart beautifully inked in this well crafted and poignant write! WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Harsh! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent has been clearly shown in this touching write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2012 3:04:00 AM)

    Yes 'WEN I MISSED U' can indeed produce a storm of differing, overpowering emotions, just as you have written. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2012 5:35:00 PM)

    I like the repition, the way sleep and dead rhymed, and of course the rhythm, its a make sense poem. (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Really heart-touching poem. ThanX for your invitation. (Report) Reply

  • Margaret Smith - Vail (1/25/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    I really like this. You did a very good job at righting this (Report) Reply

  • (1/22/2012 2:13:00 AM)

    The wording was beautiful and to the point. (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2012 9:46:00 AM)

    thanks for inviting me it was worth it reading u r poems............ (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2012 4:54:00 AM)

    .You had written it in a very nice way, thumbs up! Thanks for inviting me to read your poems, it's really great, keep on writing so more people can feel your own feelings or whatever 'feel' you had buried. Try reading my poem entitled After everything, I do need you, if you ALSO have time! ! ! Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    Beautifully written. Job well done.10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2012 9:22:00 PM)

    Your poem uses repetition and rhyme and simple ideas anyone can follow to make its point - and it succeeds, where more complicated poems fail. (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2012 3:52:00 AM)

    Cool one there, ....hello everyone I just joined and I have four wonderful poems I would like you all to read, share and comment. Lots of love. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (1/14/2012 12:58:00 AM)

    this is a very nice poem i like it....good theme....poem has its flow....nice keep it up...please read my poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/13/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, I know what that feels like wen I miss you: D.. great job (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2012 9:15:00 PM)

    I find this, very touching and you expressed yourself, very well. Keep up, the good work. (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2012 1:57:00 PM)

    awww I really enjoy this poem and thanks for sharing. I love all poems you write. You write with feeling and your experiences. (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2012 3:26:00 AM)

    Very Nice, expresses raw sentiments! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (1/6/2012 8:28:00 PM)

    An excellent and well penned write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! I will be reading more later my friend! Keep it up! God Bless You! Happy New Year! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2012 5:17:00 PM)

    Very impressive poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 10:03:00 AM)

    WEN I MISSED U good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 24, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 14, 2012

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