Wen I Missed U Poem by Harsh Vardhan k

this is a very nice poem i like it....good theme....poem has its flow....nice keep it up...please read my poem

Cool one there, ....hello everyone I just joined and I have four wonderful poems I would like you all to read, share and comment. Lots of love.

Your poem uses repetition and rhyme and simple ideas anyone can follow to make its point - and it succeeds, where more complicated poems fail.

Beautifully written. Job well done.10

.You had written it in a very nice way, thumbs up! Thanks for inviting me to read your poems, it's really great, keep on writing so more people can feel your own feelings or whatever 'feel' you had buried. Try reading my poem entitled After everything, I do need you, if you ALSO have time! ! ! Thanks.

nice penning... it tells the story and, i thinks it`s the most important part in my commenting and your writing. good job, keep it up

Outburst of the the heart beautifully inked in this well crafted and poignant write! WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Harsh! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent has been clearly shown in this touching write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

Yes 'WEN I MISSED U' can indeed produce a storm of differing, overpowering emotions, just as you have written.

I like the repition, the way sleep and dead rhymed, and of course the rhythm, its a make sense poem.

Really heart-touching poem. ThanX for your invitation.