What Can I Do

Rating: 4.8
If I am very happy talking to you …

Then what’s wrong that I do?
If all of my feelings are only for you.

Then what’s wrong that I do?

If I believe you blindly

Then what’s wrong that I do?

If I love you blindly

Then what’s wrong that I do?

If I try my best to convince you

Then what’s wrong that I do?

If you still didn’t believe me

Then what can I do?

I know you didn’t love me

Still what can I do?

As I am in love with you

Is there anything wrong that I do?

You know I can’t live without you

Still why such painful things you do? ?

Oh my love if for the first time I wrote a poem on you

Then what’s wrong that I do?

The only onething I can say

I love you… …
Tuesday, December 16, 2008
Josephine De Leux 11 June 2009
it's...the word is...conveying. I can almost see your hand gestures, face expressions. a drawing appeal. 'and in the justification by name of love, what takes root, one does not know...'
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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009
this is a nice way of expressing yourself indeed.....emotions seem to flow throught your pen....genuine and honest ones at that...10+ regards shan
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PARiS s 24 April 2009
do one thng, , make her read this poem, , she will certainly fall in love wid u
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djean Whitney 14 April 2009
This is difrent but, realy good. I hope she see's that you trouly love her.
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Suvrishti Jain 13 February 2009
simple, , , yet impressive :)
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Catrina Heart 12 February 2009
A beautiful expressive print out of emotions and queries...10+++
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Chitra - 08 February 2009
mirrors your feelings in the most sensitive way
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Anjali Sinha 05 February 2009
'what can i do its over now but it was grand i understand---' your poem reminds me of this old song a nice poem Jatin anjali
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Merna Ibrahim 25 January 2009
marvelous poem! ! keep writing and show us your talent..... Merna.
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Whitney Nicole Albright* 16 December 2008
That's really sweet, Jatin.
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