What Else He Can Poem by Akhtar Jawad

What Else He Can

Rating: 5.0


Dawn breaks with the cats' meowing voices
And whistles of eagles flying close to the earth
A man who has passed his night in dreaming vices
Tears in his eyes, underestimating his worth

Though awaken by a touching human voice,
From the mosque a call for the prayers
The call should have been his first choice
But he reacted to the call of the players

Cats and eagles and the street dogs
Prepared to play the game of difficult life
With a dashing long tongue like that of frogs
Ready to hunt with teeth, the sharpened knife

A man with a bad smelled poly bag of meat
Opens the gates for uninvited guests
Sitting on the roofs and waiting for the treat
Even lazy old eagles now become the pests

The dogs hidden below the cars parked in the lane
The street snatchers become ready for attacks
The eagles, the cats, the dogs; everyone insane,
Painful instinct of hunger no body lacks!

A war in that so many were severely injured,
Just for a piece of rotten meat, the man provided,
Though peace, law and order, he never insured,
Unanimously their god, on it they aren't divided.

Happy he goes to the mosque for the prayers
To the lovely God who created the man
Bowed his head with a group of admirers
For the food He provides; what else he can!

Thursday, March 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: food
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. Sometimes men seek first the call of his fellow men than the Kingdom of the Almighty. God is the ultimate provider of everything. In Him we depend for everything. Wonderful piece.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Meowing voices of the cat breaks dawn. A man who has passed his night in dreaming vices has found tears. The person is wise who goes to the mosque for the prayers. God's grace he feels in true heart. God provides wisdom as food to wise person and he serves selflessly for mankind. Hunger provokes thought. A kind person feels hunger of another person. This is a thought provoking as well as thoughtful poem...10

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Rini shibu 22 March 2018

Hunger of every living creature so nicely depicted here, always we forget that God is our provider

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Nudershada Cabanes 22 March 2018

Beautifully pennedpoem verse Sir Akhtar image filled poem.10

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