What I Seek? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What I Seek?

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What I wished throughout life?
No trouble, nice spending with wife,
Children just before eyes playing,
I knell down before HIM and praying,

Wished that Life should have hard going,
No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing,
Why I need continuous pet on back?
Does it not discourage and develop crack?

Little wish raising her head in corner,
Trying to woe and support garner,
I must have happy easy going,
Never have I witnessed stone throwing?

He blessed me with happy end,
Beautiful feelings with messages send,
No regrets, no feelings to amend,
Continue to seek blessings with sincere pretend,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Argum Sheth 10 September 2009

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise, I wondered and thought step so wise, One should come here and improvise,

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Pittle Shaileja 08 September 2009

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, ......10

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Durga Sethani 30 August 2009

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing,

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Rupa Shah 30 August 2009

Wished that Life should have hard going, No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing, Why I need continuous pet on back? Does it not discourage and develop crack?

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Severina Dsouza 26 August 2009

Little wish raising her head in corner, Trying to woe and support garner, ....10

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Deodath Debideen 29 October 2009

You definitely detect the vainness of ego living!

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Ashley Paul 06 October 2009

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing,

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Subbaraman N V 11 September 2009

Very poignant! A good write! Nice to go through the poem with a message.

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Chaul Vania 10 September 2009

Wished that Life should have hard going, No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing, Why I need continuous pet on back

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Kant Shri 10 September 2009

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, I knell down before HIM and praying, ....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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